Monday, 15 October 2012

SP FanFic Other Dimention Part 04


Thanks to all who read!!! And I welcome comments! ... My lab rats (Siblings) haven't read this part ... of for that matter about half of it, but yes i would like feed back please. Thanks to all that read! It is welcomed and it's great to know that my work is read and liked!!!
Now i should stop delaying and get to part 4! So here it is!

The three days after Lord Vile ‘accompanied’ her home, Adelle had finished cleaned Lord Vile’s room. When.
“Adelle wait up!”
Adelle turned to see Sarah
“Hi Sarah, how are you?”
“I’m good! But you might not be!”
“What do you mean?”
“Lord Mevolent wants to see you in the throne room at two-thirty exactly!”
“What! Why?” Adelle almost yelled
“I’m not sure, he didn’t say. But everyone has been keeping an eye out for you so they could tell you. Do you have any idea what it is about?”
“No, no I don’t! … Um what’s the time?
“Oh god! Then I’ve got to hurry! See you round … if I live”
“Um … ok bye and I hope I see you again when you’re alive and intact!”
“Me to!” Adelle yelled back as she hurried to the kitchen to put her stuff away.


Adelle arrived at the doors to the throne room a couple of minutes early. But it was better than being late. Why dose Lord Mevolent want to see me? Of all people! I’m only a maid and I haven’t done anything wrong! … Have I?
The red hoods where stationed outside the door standing like statues. Adelle had already told them who she was, than Lord Mevolent was expecting her and when he was expecting her. The only thing that he did to indicate to her the he got the message was to nod. They were like Lord Vile, never speaking people, but Lord Vile had spoken to her, so they were different.
After she waited a bit the doors opened and she walked towards the end of the room. There was a tank with someone that opposed Lord Mevolent, but he was now one of Mevolent’s prizes. Adelle shivered the poor guy he didn’t get a nice grave, not that they were very nice bit it was better than floating in a tank.
Adelle saw Serpine standing next to a chair at the top of a small amount of stars. On the Chair was Lord Mevolent himself. Adelle only glanced at him, and then looked way. She didn’t want to be disrespectful to the most powerful person on the planet. Adelle kept walking till she reached the base of the stairs then she bowed, and held it until she was acknowledge.
“You may stand child” said Mevolent. Adelle stood up strait but kept her gaze to t ground.
“What did you do to him?” said Mevolent. The sudden chill in his voice sent a shiver down her spin.
“Do to whom, my lord?” said Adelle
“Don’t play games with me child” he snarled
“My lord I honestly have no idea who you are talking about!”
“Fine I shall play your game!  Lord Vile, what did you do to Lord Vile?”
Adelle looked at him in confusion without making eye contact “Um … my lord I might be speaking out of turn – but are we playing a game?”
“No child we are not playing a game unless you are!”
“If that’s the case then I have no idea what you are talking about, because I have done nothing to Lord Vile!”
“What did you do to him” Mevolent continued obviously ignoring her response “Did you use mind control, because none of our Physics can see inside his head!”
“I am sorry to disappoint you my lord but I am no physic and I cannot see inside his head let alone make him do what I want. I still do not see why you are asking these questions my lord!”
“Nefarian, please refresh this child’s memory” he said cruelly
“Gladly! One week and a half ago you came in and cleaned Lord Vile’s room, while you were cleaning the spear rack it fell and just before it hit you Vile jumped in its way and stopped you from getting hurt. And three nights ago someone tried to rob you then Lord Vile appeared next to you and killed the man than gave you back your basket that the man stole.” Said Nefarian Serpine
“You heard about that?” said Adelle. In surprise
“Yes, there was a witness that explained the body to the red hoods. So do you remember?” said Nefarian
“Yes Lord Serpine I remember them.”
“Good, now will you tell us what you did to make Lord Vile act that way?”
“Yes, I will but I don’t know what made him act that way, because I have done nothing to him! Honestly I don’t know why he did them! Lord Serpine I was just as surprised as you when he was protecting me from the spears!”
“That’s it I am done playing games with you girl! Bring her in” said Mevolent immediately after he said it the door opened and two red hoods dragged in a middle aged woman. Adelle spun around to see who was being dragged in.  
“Adelle” the woman said as she looked up, other than being dragged in she looked OK
“Mum w-what are you doing in hear?”
“Nothing much” she responded
“Now tell me -” Mevolent said as he held up a knife to her mother’s throat “What did you do to him”
“N-nothing my lord, I-I did nothing to him”
“Tell me or she dies” he snarled as he pulled back her mother’s hair “I will not ask again”
“NOOO!” she screamed “Not my mum! Please not my mother! Please don’t kill my mother! I didn’t do anything to him my lord I swear; please my mother has nothing to do with this! Please my lord I’m begging you, let her go!”
“That’s it beg, because it is no concern to me, whether or not your mother dies. I tire of this game” he said as he walked over to his throne “What did you do”
“I-I don’t know my Lord I-I don’t know” she sobbed
“That’s it; I gave you more than enough chases to tell me what you did! Kill her mother!”
“NOOOO!” Adelle screamed as she ran for the red hoods growing in height as she did “Stay away from her!” she shouted and smacked the red hood that was now only reached her waist, he went flying across the room. The other red hood backed away from her mother and joined the other red hood that where attacking her.
“RUN!” Adelle shouted to her mother “RUN, GET AWAY FROM HERE!” her mother turned out the door and ran, just as Lord Vile had come to see what all the commotion was about.
“Don’t just stand there get her mother” Mevolent shouted angrily. Then Lord Vile shadow walked after her.
She had grown in height, so the red hoods now only came up to her middle of her thigh. The red hoods attacked from all sides with their scythes out, she punched some and they went down. She shrunk really fast and all the scythes missed her by inches. She was so small that she could hide in the folds of her maid dress that was way too big to her, she as the size of a finger now. Luckily she has a dress that could fit her when she grew or shrunk and that’s what she was wearing. A red hood picked up her brown maid dress; she jumped for cover behind a foot, then stood up and kicked it hard. The owner shouted and started hoping on one leg, she ran over to the other one and kicked it, he jumped and lander on another red hood. She used the confusion to grow back to a large size again. The red hood reached mid-thigh again. She swung her hand and knocked a number of red hoods off their feet. A red hoods scythe struck her calf.
Adelle screamed and as she did she swung her hand around and smacked the red hood down. She kicked the remaining red hood and he slid across the room.
“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH” Adelle’s mother screamed from somewhere in the distance then was suddenly cut off.
“MUM” Adelle screamed back sprinting for the door, then a mist of purple tentacles wrapped around her arms and pulled her back
“NO, LET ME GO! LET ME GO!” She screamed as she struggled, trying to break free of the mist. An invisible wall slammed into her from above pining her to the floor. She tried to shrinking to wriggle out but the wall continued to press her to the floor. Mevolent sighed
“If you want something done right you’ve got to do it yourself! Isn’t that right Nefarain.”
“Apparently so Mevolent” said Nefarain as he cuffed Adelle’s wrists using binding hand cuffs. Adelle gasped as she felt her magic being bound and she instantly shrunk to regular size.


Lord Vile shadow walked after Adelle’s mum, she wasn’t that difficult to find considering she was using the most direct way out of the castle. When he found her he shadow walked in front of her.
“AH” she yelped as she jumped way. Her eyes widened when she realised who it was. He often enjoyed that he liked the looks of fear that people gave him, it amused him.  
“Please help my daughter” she whispered “They’re going to hurt her, please. They’re convinced that she did something to you, but she didn’t I know she didn’t! And … and I know you care. I’ve seen you watching her from across the road.”
Lord Vile cocked his head, and then took a step forward, she stepped back. There where red hoods coming he could feel their presence, they were coming steadily closer. He stepped closer and grabbed her shoulder gently. She tried to pull away but his grip was strong but not painful. Lord Vile lent his head closer
“Scream” he whispered. She looked at him surprised and confused. He felt the Red hoods getting closer.
He turned a shadow sharp and stuck it in her stomach. Her scream was cut off. The red hoods saw this. Then before they could get closer he shadow walked.


They arrive at Adelle’s house. It wasn’t hurting, was she in heaven? Adelle’s mum looked down at the shadow pressing agents her stomach, it wasn’t cutting into her, she looked as saw a thin stream of shadows around her side, she looked at her back where they extended out and resumed the look of a spike. An illusion! The red hoods only saw the two parts that looked like a spike they didn’t see the thin stream around her side. They must have thought Lord Vile killed her! She looked around her house; they were in the living/dining/kitchen, the main room of the house. The room was large but that was because it was three in one. To the left is the kitchen, the green paint is peeling off the wooden cupboard, and of the wood on the island bench. In the center of the room there is a green sofa and matching arm chairs surrounding a carpet that is in front of a fire place. On either side of the fire place there are halls that lead to the bed rooms. The one of the left side leads to the parent’s bedrooms, the one on the right leads to the kid’s bedrooms. On the right side of the room there is a dining table with six chairs.
On the carpet in fount of the fire place where Adelle’s ten year old twin brothers Will and Ben, they were staring at Lord Vile and her. Why not? It’s not every day that one if the three Generals … now only two, is in your house looking like he is trying to kill your mother. Lord Vile must have seen them to because the shadows retracted.
“Hide or they will find you” Lord Vile whispered. Adelle’s mum nodded.
“Boy’s you’re going to pretend that you didn’t see us, OK! You mustn’t tell anyone not even dad or Adelle, OK. Do you understand?” Adelle’s mother said. The Twins nodded, there blond hair flopping around. Then they turned and continued putting the puzzle together, like Lord Vile and Adelle’s mother where never there.
“I’ll go to Mr Thomson’s place I’ll be able to hide there, but before I go I’ll get some clothes then leave” Said Adelle’s mum as she went into the hall that led to her bed room. Lord Vile nodded and shadow walked a few blocks away.
It could have been pure luck but walking along the street was a woman in a brown maid’s dress that looked very similar to Adelle’s mother. Lord Vile went to get a closer look. The woman was the right height and build. Even her hair looked the same, just a darker shade of blond. The face however was quite different, but that could be dealt with.


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